Презентация - Writing Skills

First of all type of name into this box –it will be used in the address and the signature
NAME

Position the address in the right place

That’s great! You should always put your own address in the top right hand-corner of a letter.

Sue Perkins 58 Crown street, Kent GT05 2CD

Place the date in the right place on the page
Sue Perkins 58 Crown street, Kent GT05 2CD
16 October 2015

That’s great. The date goes in the top right hand corner of the page.

Choose which the salutation to use and put it on the page
Dear Sir or Madam,
Dear Mrs Smith,
My dearest Mrs Smith,
Mrs Smith,

Dear Mrs Smith

That’s great. If you know the name of the person you are writing to, always write “dear” followed by their name.

Choose which first paragraph to use and put it on a page.
I’m writing to you to complain about the Radio –controlled Racing Car I bought last week
Why do you sell such rubbish cars? I want my money back right now.
Hey! I bought one of your cars last week and I thought it was going to be really wicked but actually it’s gone and broken already.

Dear Mrs Smith
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I’m writing to you to complain you about the Radio – controlled Racing Car I bought last week.

That’s right! Your first paragraph should always explain why you are writing the letter

Choose which middle paragraph to use and put it on the page
I bought my Racing car with my pocket money. I’ve wanted one for ages and all my friends told me yours was the best one to buy. I especially liked it because of the radio control.
The car doesn’t work. I expect the radio controlled car to be able to work all the time, especially when I paid for this one. I don’t think it is all well made and I’m not all happy about it.
The radio-controlled car was great for the first day that I had it, and then it just stopped working. I’ve tried replacing the batteries , and have read the manual to make sure I’m following all the instructions.

Sue Perkins 58 Crown street Kent GT05 2CD
16 October 2015
Dear Mrs Smith
I’m writing to you to complain you about the Radio-controlled Racing car I bought last week . The Radio-controlled car was great for the first day that I had it , and then It just stopped working. I’ve tried replacing the batteries? And have read The manual to make sure I’m following all the instructions.

That’s great, the middle section of a letter should give us much detail as possible clearly and briefly.

Choose which end paragraph to use and put it on a page
Also I don’t like the color of my car and would like to swap it to a red one. Would that be possible?
I’d be most grateful if you would get in touch to let me know my car doesn’t work, and how I can get it repaired or replaced.
Hope you are all well and that your business goes from strength to strength

Sue Perkins 58 Crown street Kent GT05 2CD
16 October 2015
Dear Mrs Smith
I’m writing to you to complain you about the Radio-controlled Racing car I bought last week . The Radio-controlled car was great for the first day that I had it , and then It just stopped working. I’ve tried replacing the batteries? And have read The manual to make sure I’m following all the instructions. I’d be most grateful if you are get in touch to let me my car doesn’t work, and how I can get It repaired or replaced.